[Insert Title Here]
August 9th, 2005
I’ve met up with my director, Gary Conrad, yesterday and discussed with him some things about my storyboard. He’s a swell guy, and he gave me a few notes to help out my pitch, it looks great! I can’t wait to pitch this again in it’s revamped glory.
Above, is the title I created for the cartoon. Though it may change, I do enjoy creating titles for my cartoons with a certain creative design that’ll fit to the idea of the concept.
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On August 10th, 2005 at 12:00 am
Good looking title! For a moment I thought “That’s kind of hard to read,” but then during that same moment I thought the name was “Vlad.” I’m an idiot. I do have a small concern though, that the bottom text is fairly small and detailed, and might be tricky to read if for any reason the logo is shrunk down a lot in print. Though I checked myself, and it’s still fairly clear even at 20%, so I’d say it’s just a minor concern. And of course it exudes a ton of character, but then that’s always been one of your talents. Good luck with the pitch, it ought to be smashing!
PS, I sent you a somewhat important email just a little while ago. Hope you see it soon.
On August 11th, 2005 at 12:00 am
Don’t stop sharing cool stuff like this on the site! It’s so cool to see you all go thru the process. I do concur that it may be a bit hard to read, however… but, I know you’ll nail it.
On August 12th, 2005 at 12:00 am
Hmm….The “Ivan” part doesn’t seem to read very well and looks too tweaked by cheap Photoshop efx. You might consider hand re-drawing the whole thing so that it becomes readable at the blink of an eye.